大学英语六级考试优秀范文及写作指导
关于如何看待大学生上网的英语作文
Internet Surfing-因特网冲浪
Nowadays, there is a growing popularity of Internet surfing on college campus. An increasing number of students, majoring either in science or engineering or in liberal arts, spend many hours surfing the Internet with keen interest everyday.
Internet surfing has attracted college students like magnets because it is the world of Internet and the world of globalization. First,with the global coverage of Internet,we can reach out and touch anyone at any place of the world. Via Internet,we can send and receive E-mails at any time much faster, cheaper and more effective than conventional means such as telephone, telex and fax. Next,via access to the home pages of libraries, universities, journals and news agencies, and research organizations, we can easily acquire all kinds of information, to know what is going on all over the world. Finally, by clicking the mouse, we are capable of doing such important things as shopping, finding jobs, making friends, down-loading files and programs, doing business, publishing papers and freely airing our opinions on all sorts of interesting issues. What is more, Internet offhrs many opportunities. For example, we can work, educate ourselves and communicate with others at home via Internet.
In the Information Age, it is difficuh to imagine modern life without Internet. With the rapid development of Information Technology industry, successful dot-com companies mushroomed everywhere. Internet is revolutionizing our economy, our society and our life.
关于大学生压力的英语作文
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic How Should College Students Relieve Pressure? You should write at least 150 words, and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:
1)当今的大学生要面临很多来自不同方面的压力
2)大学生缓解压力的方式有…
3)你一般都是如何排解压力的?
How Should College Students Relieve Pressure?
___________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________
关于大学生压力的英语作文-行文思路
本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点指出一个问题，提纲第2点要求说明如何解决该问题，提纲第3点要求阐述“我”的做法，由此可判断本文应为问题解决型作文。
根据所给提纲，本文应包含如下内容：指出当今的大学生主要面临哪些压力;列举大学生缓解压力的方式;谈谈“我”是采取哪种方式排解压力的。
关于大学生压力的英语作文-高分范文
How Should College Students Relieve Pressure?
Today’s college students face many pressures, mainly from parents’ expectation, study, economy, employment and all kinds of competition. [1]Although pressure to some extent can provide motivation, overdue pressure has a serious negative effect. Pressure can destroy a student’s confidence. [2]More seriously, it might make some students lose control of their emotions and behaviors.
[3]Considering the great damage of overdue pressure, college students should learn to how to relieve pressure. [2]First, we should have a right evaluation of ourselves [4]so as to [5]make use of advantages and avoid disadvantages. [2]Second, we should [6]set a clear aim of a struggle. The aim can give us motivation, and make us become active. [2]Third, [7]attending collective activities is an effective way to relieve pressure. [2]Finally, if you find pressure is nearly [8]beyond your control, you’d better turn to professional psychological guidance.
[2]As to me, my pressure is mainly from future employment. [4]In order to reduce it, I asked my parents help me analyse my advantages and disadvantages, and produce a more practical job objection. [2]So my employment pressure was relieved greatly. Now I become confident in my future, and I [9]do believe I can get an ideal job after my graduation.
【亮点点评】
[1]although引导让步状语从句。
[2]过渡衔接词语，使文章条理清晰、衔接紧密。
[3]“考虑到，鉴于”，介词。
[4]表示目的。
[5]“扬长避短”。
[6]“设立一个明确的奋斗目标”。
[7]动名词短语作主语，用不同于前两点的句式提出缓解压力的第三种方式。
[8]“超出…范围或能力”。
[9]强调动词believe。
佳句临摹
1.佳句：Although pressure to some extent can provide motivation, overdue pressure has a serious negative effect.
临摹：尽管兼职工作能够带来很多好处，但我们不应该在它上面花费太多的时间。
___________________________________________________________
2.佳句：Attending collective activities is an effective way to relieve
临摹：学会如何与人沟通是步入社会的第一步也是最重要的一步。
___________________________________________________________
3.佳句：In order to reduce it, I asked my parents help me analyse my advantages and disadvantages
临摹：为了在激烈的竞争中获得优势，大学生们必须全面发展自己的能力。
___________________________________________________________
【KEY】
1. Although a part-time job does much good to us, we should not spend too much time on it.
2. Learning how to deal with people is the first and the most important step to enter into the society.
3. In order to get their priority in the fierce competition, college students have to develop their abilities
关于大学生使用信用卡的英语作文 Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Credit Cards on Campus. You should write at least 150 words, and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:
1)近年来越来越多的大学生开始使用信用卡
2)分析产生该现象的原因
3)针对大学生使用信用卡提出你的建议
Credit Cards on Campus
___________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________
关于大学生使用信用卡的英语作文-行文思路
本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点指出一种现象，提纲第2点要求分析产生该现象的原因，提纲第3点要求针对该现象给出“我”的建议，由此可判断本文应为现象解释型作文。
根据所给提纲，本文应包含如下内容：描述大学生使用信用卡的现状;分析大学生信用卡用户增加的原因;针对大学生使用信用卡提出“我”的建议。
关于大学生使用信用卡的英语作文-高分范文
Credit Cards on Campus
In recent years, credit cards have [1]gained more popularity among college students. [2]With banks’ more focus on college market, [3]an increasing number of college students have applied for a credit card and begun to consume by it.
[4]The following three factors can account for the popularity of credit cards in college. [5]Firstly, a credit card provides overdrawing service, [6]which is [7]a big attraction for those students who have no much money for their domination.
[5]Secondly, a credit card can help release financial burdens on those poor students, and [8]hence reduce the risk of their dropping school for lacking money. [5]Besides, many banks make some preferential policies on credit cards, like sending a gift, lowering year cost. [7]Drawn by these policies, many college students apply for credit cards.
[5]As far as I am concerned, it is not a bad thing for college students to own credit cards. [5]However, there is misuse of credit cards among college students. Many students use credit cards to buy luxurious things they don’t need really, and even some of them owe a big credit cards debt. [5]Therefore, schools and banks have responsibility to let college students learn how to use credit cards properly.
[9]Only in this way can college students enjoy really the advantages of credit cards.
关于大学生使用信用卡的英语作文【亮点点评】
[1]“越来越流行”。
[2]“随着”，介词。
[3]“越来越多的”。
[4]用于引出原因。
[5]过渡衔接词语，使文章条理清晰、衔接紧密。
[6]which引导非限制性定语从句。
[7]表示“吸引”的两种不同的方式，用词富于变化。
[8]“由此，因此”。
[9]“only+状语”位于句首，引起句子部分倒装。
关于大学生使用信用卡的英语作文-佳句临摹
1.佳句：With banks’ more focus on college market, an increasing number of college students have applied for a credit card.
临摹：随着市场经济的快速发展，金钱在社会中扮演着越来越重要的角色。
___________________________________________________________
2.佳句： A credit card can help those poor students pay their tuition and fees, and hence reduce the risk of their dropping school.
临摹：一些同学希望通过社会实践提高自己的能力，并由此来增加就业机会。
3.佳句：Drawed by these policies, many college students apply for credit cards.
临摹：在就业压力的迫使下，一些大学生开始自主创业。
___________________________________________________________
【KEY】
1. With the rapid development of market economy, money plays a more and more important role in the society.
2. Some students hope to enhance their practical abilities by attending social practice, and hence increase their chances of employment.
3. Forced by employment pressure, some college graduates begin to set up their own businesses.(
关于勤俭节约的英语作文Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Is Thrift Still a Good Virtue? You should write at least 150 words, and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:
1)随着人们生活水平的提高，一些人认为勤俭节约的生活方式已经过时了
2)但是很多人反对这种说法
3)你的看法是…，为什么?
Is Thrift Still a Good Virtue?
___________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________
关于勤俭节约的英语作文-行文思路
本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点提出一种观点，提纲第2点提出另外一种相反的观点，提纲第3点要求谈谈“我”的观点，由此可判断本文应为对比选择型作文。
根据所给提纲，本文应包含如下内容：提出第1种观点：节俭和朴素的生活方式已经过时了，并说明理由;提出第2种观点：勤俭节约仍然是一种美德，并说明理由;表明“我”对节俭的看法，并说明理由。
关于勤俭节约的英语作文-高分范文
Is Thrift Still a Good Virtue?
With the improvement of the living standards, many people are [1]no longer interested in the simple life style [2]and some of them even feel ashamed to be thrifty. What they pursue is the latest fashion. In their eyes, thrift is already out of style.
[3]However, still other people insist that thrift is a good virtue. They say
that the unprecedented power of production doesn’t mean that we are entitled to a life of extravagance, because our natural resources are limited [2]and some of them even are [4]on the decline. [5]Moreover, they hold that waste may lead to degradation of social atmosphere and environmental pollution as well.
[6]As to me, I prefer the latter opinion. I believe [7] “Waste not, want not.”The truth of this saying is [8]not to give up comfort but to enhance efficiency.
[5]In fact, economic growth depends enormously on saving. [5]Besides, there are still millions of Chinese [9]living under poverty line. We can never afford reckless waste. [5]Therefore, [10]it is no doubt that thrift is still a good virtue that we should not give up.
关于勤俭节约的英语作文【亮点点评】
[1]“不再”。
[2]表示递进。
[3]引出另外一种观点。
[4]“在下降”。
[5]过渡衔接词语，使文章条理清晰、衔接紧密。
[6]用于引出自己的观点或选择。
[7]引用谚语“俭以防匮”。
[8]not... but连接并列结构，意为“不是…而是”。
[9]现在分词短语作后置定语。
[10]“毫无疑问”。
关于勤俭节约的英语作文-佳句临摹
1.佳句：Our natural resources are limited and some of them even are on the decline.
临摹：车祸使人们的财产遭受极大的损失，甚至还夺走了无数人的生命。
___________________________________________________________
2.佳句：The truth of this saying is not to give up comfort but to enhance efficiency.
临摹：我们永远都不应该低估自己的能力，而应该相信一句谚语：“有志者，事竟成。”
___________________________________________________________
【KEY】
1. Traffic accidents have caused great damages to people’s properties and even taken away thousands of people’s lives.
2. We should never underestimate our abilities but should believe in the proverb: “Where there is a will, there is a way.”
关于节食减肥的英语作文Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic On Dieting. You should write at least 150 words, and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:
1)现在有越来越多人的选择节食减肥，有的人是为了健康，但是更多的人是为了有一个苗条的身材
2)分析节食减肥可能带来的影响
3)你的建议
On Dieting
_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________
___________________________________________________________
关于节食减肥的英语作文-行文思路
本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点指出一种现象并要求说明原因，提纲第2点要求分析这种现象可能带来的影响，提纲第3点要求针对该现象提出“我”的建议，由此可判断本文应为现象解释型作文。
根据所给提纲，本文应包含如下内容：描述越来越多的人节食的现象并分析主要原因;阐述节食不当可能带来的影响;针对节食给出“我”的建议。
关于节食减肥的英语作文-高分范文
On Dieting
Nowadays more and more people are beginning to go on a diet. Some people are concerned with their health, and they go on a diet in order to lose unwanted weight. But still others, [1]especially the young women, are paying too much attention to their outward appearance. They [2]become the leading numbers who go on a diet.
[3]However, dieting might [4]bring great negative effects on people. [3]For one thing, quite a lot of people don’t really need dieting to keep health, and they diet just because they want to keep slim. For them, dieting [5]not only is useless but also might damage their health. [3]For another, some people lack enough knowledge on how to diet scientifically. [3]As a result, they are likely to suffer from malnutrition.
[6]Considering the serious damage of unhealthy dieting, we should be cautious in dieting. [3]In my opinion, dieting,[7]for whatever reasons, needs professional guidance. [8]Only with right guidance can dieting work [9]as we expect.
关于节食减肥的英语作文-【亮点点评】
[1]“尤其”，表示强调。
[2]“成为主力军”。
[3]过渡衔接词语，使文章条理清晰、衔接紧密。
[4]用于引出对危害或负面影响的阐述。
[5]“not only… but also”用于连接并列成分。
[6]“考虑到，鉴于”，介词。
[7]“不管因为什么原因”，whatever意为“无论什么”。
[8]“only+状语”位于句首，引起句子部分倒装。
[9]“像我们期望的那样”。
关于节食减肥的英语作文-佳句临摹
1.佳句：For them, dieting not only is useless but also might damage their health.
临摹：基因技术不仅使动植物受益而且还有助于提高人类的生活质量。
___________________________________________________________
2.佳句：In my opinion, dieting, for whatever reasons, needs professional guidance.
临摹：无论你的目标是什么，你都必须通过诚实的劳动来实现它。
___________________________________________________________
3.佳句：Only with right guidance can dieting work as we expect.
临摹：只有修满足够的学分，学生才能够获准毕业。
___________________________________________________________
【KEY】
1. Genetic technology helps not only the plant and animals but also human beings to live a higher quality
2. Whatever your aim is, you must worked honestly to attain it.
3. Only when adequate credits have been achieved can students gain the qualification for graduation.
关于交通事故的英语作文Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Road Accidents. You should write at least 150 words, and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:
1)交通事故会给人们的生命和财产带来很大的损失
2)分析交通事故发生的主要原因
3)如何降低交通事故发生率
Road Accidents
___________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________
关于交通事故的英语作文-行文思路
本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点提出一个问题，提纲第2点要求分析造成该问题的原因，提纲第3点要求说明解决该问题的方法，由此可判断本文应为问题解决型作文。
根据所给提纲，本文应包含如下内容：指出道路事故的严重性及主要危害;分析导致道路事故的主要原因;说明应该如何降低道路事故的发生率。
关于交通事故的英语作文-高分范文
Road Accidents
Road accidents, [1]as one of the important social problems, have always been paid great concern. In most of the big cities, every day, there happen quite a few road accidents. In these accidents, many people suffer great property losses [2]and some of them even lose their lives.
[3]The following reasons contribute to road accidents. [4]Above all, traffic is becoming heavier and heavier, especially in big cities. More and more vehicles on road [5]increase the chances of accidents. [4]In addition, many drivers lack safety awareness and even don’t comply with the traffic regulations. For example, some drivers run the red light or drive after being drunk. [4]Besides, the [6]weak supervision and management of traffic control sectors is a noticeable reason.
[7]Considering the seriousness of the traffic problem, [8]it is high time for us to take more effective measures to solve it. [4]Firstly, the government should invest more money to improve public transportation and provide more transportation ways for people to choose. [4]Secondly, stricter laws and regulations should be made to punish those who break traffic regulations. [4]Finally, drivers should enhance safety awareness and develop good driving manners. [9]Only in this way could road accidents be avoided successfully.
关于交通事故的英语作文【亮点点评】
[1]插入语，as意为“作为”。
[2]表递进。
[3]用于引出原因。
[4]过渡衔接词语，使文章条理清晰、衔接紧密。
[5]“增加了…的机会或可能性”。
[6]“监管不力”，weak的使用准确地道。
[7]“考虑到，鉴于”，介词。
[8]用于引出解决办法，表示解决问题的紧迫性,常译为“早该是…的时候了”。
[9]“only+状语”位于句首，引起句子部分倒装。
关于交通事故的英语作文-佳句临摹
1.佳句：In these accidents, many people suffer great property losses and some of them even lose their lives.
临摹：一些人失败后可能会变得灰心丧气，甚至会放弃成功的希望。
___________________________________________________________
2.佳句：More and more vehicles on road increase the chances of accidents.
临摹：许多学生认为考取更多的证书可以增加他们找工作的机会。
___________________________________________________________
3.佳句：It is high time for us to take more effective measures to solve it.
临摹：因此，我们早该关注一下人口过剩问题了。
___________________________________________________________
【KEY】
1. Some people, after a failure, may become discouraged and even give up their hope for success.
2. Many students believe that more certificates may increase the chances of their being employed.
3. Therefore, it is high time we paid special attention to the problem of overpopulation.(
关于大学生就业难的英语作文 Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic College Students’ Job Hunting. You should write at least 150 words according to the outline given below in Chinese:
1)近年来出现大学生就业难的现象
2)产生这一现象的原因
3)如何解决这一问题
关于大学生就业难的英语作文【思路点拨】
本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点要求指出目前大学生就业难的现象，提纲第2点要求分析这种现象产生的原因，提纲第3点则要求阐述应该如何解决这一问题，由此可判断本文应为问题解决型作文。
根据所给提纲，本文应包含以下内容：提出大学生就业难的现象，指出现象的表现；说明现象产生的原因，如大学生追求目标过高等；从几个方面提出解决方法。
关于大学生就业难的英语作文【参考范文】
College Students’ Job Hunting
Nowadays, the employment of college students is becoming more and more of a problem. About a decade ago, university students could find satisfactory and enviable jobs after graduation, while the things are quite different at present. In addition, according to statistics, about 30% of graduate students can’t find a job but stay at home after graduation。
Employment difficulty of college students is due to the following reasons. Among these, the increasing recruitment of colleges and universities plays a vital role. In addition, many colleges and universities fail to adapt their courses to the development of economy。
Considering the seriousness of unemployment of college students, I think it is high time that we took effective measures to solve the problem. Above all, college students should realize their own defects and further improve themselves to keep their competitive edge in society. Moreover, colleges or universities should provide more trainings and internship opportunities before the students enter the society. Besides, college students should hold a right attitude towards jobs and set their job expectations at a suitable level. Only through these ways can the college students find a satisfactory job and have a brighter future。(
关于大学生同居利与弊的英语作文Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic My View on College Student’s cohabitation. You should write at least 150 words, and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:
1)现在社会上的未婚同居现象相当普遍，大学生中也存在这种现象
2)分析大学生同居的利与弊
3)你怎样看待大学生同居现象？为什么？
关于大学生同居利与弊的英语作文【思路点拨】
本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点指出一种现象，提纲第2点要求分析该现象的利与弊，提纲第3点要求谈谈“我”对该现象的看法，由此可判断本文应为对比选择型作文。
根据所给提纲，本文应包含如下内容：描述大学生中的未婚同居现象，引出对其的争议；对比分析大学生同居的利与弊；表明“我”对大学生未婚同居现象的立场并说明理由。
关于大学生同居利与弊的英语作文【参考范文】
My View on College Students’ Cohabitation
Nowadays, premarital cohabitation is common and popular and this phenomenon has extended to the campus. More and more college student lovers choose to live together off campus. This phenomenon has aroused great public concern and there are much discussion on its advantages and disadvantages。
Admittedly, college students’ cohabitation has its advantages. One of them is that the lovers can know each other better by living together. They can decide whether their romantic relationship should go on. Secondly, cohabitation matures college students and improves their sense of responsibility. However, there are also many problems resulting from the cohabitation on campus. A good example to illustrate this point is that some girls might be hurt by their irresponsible boyfriends. Besides, living together will involve many trivial things, which of course will influence their study。
From my point of view, it is unwise for college student lovers to live together during their education. After all, premarital cohabitation is not an easy thing, which is too early for college students who are not mature enough. Therefore, I suggest that the college students should take love seriously and do not choose to live together before graduation。
关于电视选秀节目的英语作文 Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Attending TV PK shows does(or does not) good to young people. You should write at least 150 words, and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:
1)现在各种各样的电视选秀节目吸引了许多年轻人
2)为了实现明星梦，一些年轻人甚至放弃了学业，这种现象引起了许多关注
3)你怎么看？为什么？
关于电视选秀节目的英语作文【思路点拨】
本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点和第2点指出一种有争议的现象，提纲第3点要求表明“我”对该现象的看法，由此可判断本文应为对比选择型作文。
根据所给提纲，本文应包含如下内容：描述年轻人热衷选秀节目的现象，引出对其的争议；表明“我”对年轻人热衷选秀节目的看法，并说明“我”的理由。
关于电视选秀节目的英语作文【参考范文】
Attending TV PK Shows Does No Good to Young People
Nowadays TV PK shows are great hits in China and have attracted many young people. Some youngsters even give up their studies to attend these shows in the hope of becoming famous overnight. Some people think these shows provide young people more chance to show talents, while others believe that attending these shows does no good to the young people. As for me, I prefer to the latter opinion。
It should be admitted that some young people like Li yuchun has stood out from the numerous attendants in the PK show, but that doesn’t mean attending the PK shows is a good way to become successful for young people. The following reasons can support my view. Firstly, TV PK shows breed restlessness and induce young people to hunt after fame at whatever cost. Secondly, TV PK shows can subvert the youngsters’ values. They think attending the PK shows is a shortcut to the success, so they may despise the way of achieving success by hard work. Finally, if the young people fail in these shows, they will suffer a psychological unbalance。
In a word, entering for TV PK shows is not a good way for young people to make a success. I suggest young people should think twice before deciding to attend PK shows。
关于大学生自助游的英语作文 Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Self help Traveling of College Students. You should write at least 150 words, and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:
1)大学生出去旅行经常会选择“自助游”
2)分析大学生选择“自助游”的原因
3)你的看法
关于大学生自助游的英语作文【思路点拨】
本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点指出一种现象，提纲第2点要求分析这种现象产生的原因，提纲第3点要求谈谈“我”对该现象的看法，由此可判断本文应为现象解释型作文。
根据所给提纲，本文应包含以下内容：简单说明何谓“自助游”，描述大学生热衷于“自助游”的现象；分析大学生选择“自助游”主要原因；阐述“我”对“自助游”的看法。
关于大学生自助游的英语作文【参考范文】
Self-help Traveling of College Students
So called self-help traveling refers that travelers themselves arrange travel route, travel time, and all the other matters during travel, without any guide and team leader. Nowadays this kind of traveling model is gaining more and more popularity among college students. According to the survey, over 80% of college students prefer self-help traveling to following a tour group。
Why are college students so fond of self-help traveling? Above all, self-help traveling gives travelers more freedom and space. College students don’t like being restricted. They want to arrange their travel as they wish. Moreover, self-help traveling provides college students a good chance to improve their adaptability and viability. Besides, the expenses in self-help traveling are controlled by travelers themselves. It is a good choice for those college students who have not much money for their disposal。
As a college student, I enjoy self-help traveling very much, and I have benefited a lot from it. For one thing, I have appreciated many amazing scenery that those travelers who follow tour groups can not. For another, self-help travel helps me learn how to deal with people better。
关于网络犯罪的英语作文
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Cyber Crimes. You should write at least 150 words, and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:
1)随着互联网的普及和应用，网络犯罪开始摆在世人面前
2)应该如何来打击和预防网络犯罪越来越成为人们必须要解决的一个难题
3)作为大学生，你应该怎么做？
关于网络犯罪的英语作文【思路点拨】
本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点提出一个问题，提纲第2点指出解决该问题的紧迫性，提纲第3点要求谈谈大学生应该如何应对该问题，由此可判断本文应为问题解决型作文。
根据所给提纲，本文应包含以下内容：描述网络犯罪出现的背景及问题现状；指出解决网络犯罪问题的紧迫型，说明解决办法；从大学生的角度谈谈应该如何应对网络犯罪。
关于网络犯罪的英语作文【参考范文】
Cyber Crimes来源：考试大
With the popularization of Internet, cyber crimes have become a serious problem facing us. Nowadays cyber criminals seem to be everywhere on the Internet. To illustrate, some commit fraud or lift intellectual property, others snatch passwords or disrupt e-commerce, and still others unleash viruses to crash computers. As a result, these crimes destroy network security greatly and make computer users suffer great losses。
However, we shouldn’t tolerate these cyber criminals any more. It’s high time for us to take effective measures to fight against cyber crimes. First, we should reinforce the cyber laws to punish cyber criminals strictly. Moreover, we should develop high techniques as soon as possible to improve intrusion detection and
prevent cyber crimes. Besides, more talented people should be trained and more effective firewalls should be built up so as to make the net immune to all kinds of viruses。
As college students, we have responsibility to join the battle against cyber crimes. For one thing, we should not use others’ computers unless we get permission. For another, we should be honest to others on the Internet and not release or spread unreal information. In a word, it takes our common efforts to defeat cyber crimes。
关于大学生心理健康的英语作文
How to improve student's mental health
1、大学生的心理健康十分重要
2、因此，学校可以....。.
3、我们自己应当....。.来源：考试大
题目分析：
学生的心理健康是近年来被热议的话题之一，属于经典的问题解决型，故不外乎采用举例子，作比较，分类别，列数字，打比方等方式讨论。
参考范文：
Students' mental health has been playing an increasingly important role in our day-to-day life. Indeed, it is widely accepted that it has gained growing popularity among persons in all walks of life. There is a general discussion today about the issue of disorder in brains。
Obviously, it is necessary that effective actions should be taken to prevent problems. Authorities in universities play a critical role in the situation. To begin with, schools, such as colleges or universities, can provide chances for the young men to ease their attention. What's more, some are physically strong, but psychological problems are able to bring potential threats. Teaches may have a chance to find them in advance. Besides, specialists in this field are to be required to make full preparation for cases in time. Facing the crisis, experts can deal with it in a professional way, which means they have more or better opportunities to save us than others. (学校)
From the factors mentioned above, we may safely draw the conclusion that we can free ourselves from mental illness by taking certain precautions. For example, if you have pains or puzzles in mind, finding a friend to express these is a good way to release pressure. Certainly, there is little doubt that further attention will be paid to the issue。(我们)
总结：
potential threats 潜在威胁
ease 减轻，舒缓
psychological problems 心理问题
precaution 预防措施
release pressure 释放压力
play an important/critical role in sth
it is widely accepted that ……
To begin with, What's more, Besides,
From the factors mentioned above draw the conclusion that 等等均为经典模板句式！
1
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic: Turn off Your Cell Phone. You should write at least 150 words and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:
1、手机给我们的生活带来了便利。
2、但是手机铃声也会影响其他人。
3、在某些场合请关掉你的手机。
Turn off Your Cell Phone
With the development of information techno1ogy and reduced price of communication products, the mobi1e phone has become a necessity for most people. Obviously, it shortens the distance between people and makes our life more convenient. Thanks to the cell phone, it’s easy for us to contact or be contacted by others anytime and anywhere. We will never miss any important meetings，great deals or admirable opportunities.
However，have you noticed sometimes the cell phone also brings embarrassment to us? It’s not rare to see someone pressing the cell phone to his ear and shouting 1oud1y in public as if there were no one else present. And I’m sure each one has had such an experience that the cell phone ring continuous1y on a formal occasion. Perhaps these people have many 1ife-and-death reasons to keep the phone working at all times, but it interrupts people around them who have to hear what they don’t care when they want to concentrate on what they’re doing.
So if you are one of them, please shut off your cell phone in public, especially on a quiet and serious occasion. It’s a respect for both others and yourself.
2
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic: The Post-graduate Craze. You should write at least 150 words and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:
1、目前很多人报考研(Q吧) 究生。
2、我认为形成这股热潮的原因是……
The Post-graduate Craze
Each year, millions of college students will sit in for the post-graduate entrance examination. More and more students have regarded the pursuing of a master degree as an indispensable part of their education.
What is to account for their enthusiasm for a post-graduate diploma? First, it is the demand of the time. In an age of knowledge updating and information explosion, what you have learned in college can hardly meet the demand of society. Talents of high quality who are equipped with the latest knowledge and skill will be needed more than ever. That is why many students will further their studies.
Second, we all recognize that the more education you have, the more likely you are to succeed. Compared with those without a master degree, masters will enjoy more preferential treatment, for example, better salaries, more opportunities for promotion and training. A post-graduate degree can guarantee a more promising career.
Last but not least, with the graduation of a large number of college students, competition for jobs becomes more and more fierce. One way to gain some advantage over others is to have a higher degree.
No wonder millions of students will consider pursuing a post-graduate degree.
3
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic: My Idea of Pop Music. You should write at least 150 words and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:
1、有人认为流行音乐不能登大雅之堂。
2、有人认为音乐无高低贵贱之分，只有兴趣上的差别。
3、我认为……
My Idea of Pop Music
Pop music is held I contempt by many people. In these people’s eyes pop music is always in sharp contrast to “lofty music”. The latter refers to symphonies and operas of the European countries. They show great concern for the fact that many people prefer pop music to symhonies, because for them pop music should be excluded from the holy palace of music.
Conversely, many people have an ordor for pop music. They argue that people who want us to listen to symhonies are advocating a kind of “elite culture”. This notion is unacceptable to pop music fans, for they don’t believe that symphonies are loftier than pop music. The difference only lies in the interests of different people. It is unfair to speak of pop music with contempt while speaking of symphonies with awe.
In conclusion, my idea is that just as there is no distinction between high culture and low culture, so it is inappropriate to say pop music belongs to the “lower”people whereas symphonies in a higher, loftier form of music. After all, there are many badly-composed symphonies. And we can’t expect every piece of pop music to be excellent. Pop music reflects the thoughts and interests of a certain age group of a generation. It is the product of a certain age, but it also has something universal, something that belongs to all human beings, that underlies its great success among people. In this sense it is rather foolish for some peopleof media to show great concern simply because many people prefer pop music. Anyway pop music has become an indispensable part of the human family.
中美教育差异对比
The Differences of Education between America and China
Education is culture, and different educations show different societies’culture. Americans regard education as the means by which the inequalities among individuals are to be erased and by which every desirable end is to be achieved. While Chinese education is for foundation education, but students may be not learn much. But all in all, different education systems account for the different phenomenon, because different society backgrounds and different culture helps human create a different country in the world.
The different society structure plays an important part in the education system. In China, all those who can enter the University have received an elite education and before enrollment they have devoted themselves to hard studying. Therefore, they are good at getting high marks on mathematics, psychics and so on. However, they are lack of chances to practice skills in real world thus having no social experiences. In that case, after graduation, most students find it difficult to find a satisfactory job though many of them get a job through the relationship net.
While in America, the education system pays more attention to social skills than to marks .Students have developed the ability to be independence in life and work. After university, they show great capability of thinking, innovation and creation which make them keep pace with the modern world. They are competent for the challenging work and can gain a good job in America with ease.
There is a huge gap on education between America and China, but we can’t say which one is right or wrong, ‘cause each of the education system is based on the different backgrounds, American education should be following the American’s culture, meanwhile, Chinese education has to follow Chinese culture. A good education model for China is very important to the learning process, and also is
very hard. But the most important thing we need is the modern education which is internationalization education system and localization education systems unite for China and America, this is also what the education itself needs.
大学占座现象 Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Reserving a Seat. You should write at least 150 words, and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:
1)很多大学里“占座”现象十分普遍
2)这种现象会带来哪些影响
3)你对此的看法
Reserving a Seat
___________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________
行文思路
本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点指出一种现象，提纲第2点要求分析该现象带来的影响，提纲第3点要求谈谈“我”对该现象的看法。
根据所给提纲，本文应包含如下内容：描述大学生在教室和图书馆“占座”的现象;阐述这种现象带来的不良影响;谈谈“我”对“占座”现象的看法。
高分范文
Reserving a Seat
We often see there is a table-cloth, a book or something else on the desk in the classroom or library, [1]indicating the seat is taken. This kind of phenomenon is very usual in almost all colleges and universities. [2]Strangely enough, most of students seem to [3]take this for granted, and few will protest it.
[4]Though most of students’ taking seats in advance is for the purpose of better study, this kind of phenomenon has great negative effects. [5]On the one hand, it is a selfish behavior, which damages other students’ interests. [6]Even if many students come to the classroom very early, they can not find a seat. [5]On the other hand, reserving a seat [7]violates the rule of fairness. [8]No matter how late you come to class, the seat is still reserved for you [6]even though many others are eager for that seat.
[9]Considering the above-mentioned, I think, [10]it is high time that we college students took a good look of our behavior. [5]Indeed, only if all of us can improve our consciousness, it is not a difficult task for us to get rid of this kind of phenomenon “reserving a seat”.
【亮点点评】
[1]“表示”，现在分词短语作伴随状语。
[2]“非常奇怪的是”，副词使用恰当。
[3]“认为…理所当然”。
[4]though引导让步状语从句，引出对不良影响的阐述。
[5]过渡衔接词语，使文章条理清晰、衔接紧密。
[6]even if/ even though引导让步状语从句。
[7]“违背了公平原则”。
[8]“no matter +疑问词”表示“无论，不管”，引导让步状语从句。
[9]用于得出结论。considering用作介词，意为“考虑到，鉴于”。
[10]用于引出解决办法，表示解决问题的紧迫性,常译为“早该是…的时候了”。
佳句临摹
1.佳句：Even if many students come to the classroom very early, they can not find a seat.
临摹：即使要花费更多的钱，父母仍然愿意送他们的独生子女去更好的学校。
___________________________________________________________
2.佳句：No matter how late you come to class, the seat is still reserved for you.
临摹：有了私家车，不管天气如何，也不管什么时候出门，人们都可以带孩子或父母去任何地方。
___________________________________________________________
3.佳句：
Considering the above-mentioned, I think, it is high time that we college students took a good look of our behavior.
临摹：鉴于以上所述，我认为，加强对大学生的心理辅导是当务之急。
___________________________________________________________________________.
【KEY】
1. Parents are willing to send their only child to better schools even if it costs more.
2. With private cars, people can take their children or elder parents anywhere, no matter what the weather is like and no matter when they go out.
3. Considering the above-mentioned, I think, it is high time for us to strengthen the psychological instruction on college students.
你怎样看待考试 Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic The Attitude towards Examination. You should write at least 150 words, and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:
1)人们对待考试一直褒贬不一
2)你怎样看待考试，为什么?
3)提出你的建议
The Attitude towards Examination ___________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________
行文思路
本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点提出一个有争议的话题，提纲第2点要求谈谈“我”对其的态度，提纲第3点要求提出“我”的建议，由此可判断本文应为对比选择型作文。
根据所给提纲，本文应包含如下内容：通过大学考试引出人们对待考试的不同态度;表明“我”对考试的态度，并说明理由;针对考试提出“我”的建议。
高分范文
The Attitude towards Examination
[1]There are always many arguments about the advantages and disadvantages of
examination. Some people think examination is the only best way to test how examinees have mastered what they have studied. [2]However, still others hold the opposite opinion. They argue that examination can’t measure how the students have really studied. They say it can do [3]nothing but burden the students.
[4]As for me, I think the examination is very useful to both teachers and students.
[4]On the one hand, examination can help teachers check how much students have learned about a subject and thus know what should be their teaching focus. [4]On the other hand, [5]as far as students are concerned, by examination, they can [6]not only know how they have studied [6]but also find out what they haven’t mastered well. [4]Thus, they could improve their studying method so as to make greater progress.
[4]Of course, examination is not the only way to measure one’s ability. [4]Also, too many examinations are a burden on both teachers and students. [4]But, in sum, the examination [7]does more good than harm. Therefore, I think the correct attitude towards examination should be to [8]take full advantage of it and avoid its disadvantage.
【亮点点评】
[1]用于表示某事存在争议。
[2]用于引出对立观点。
[3]“仅仅，只是”。
[4]过渡衔接词语，使文章条理清晰、衔接紧密。
[5]“就…而言”。
[6]用于连接并列成分。
[7]“利大于弊”。
[8]“扬长避短”。
佳句临摹
1.佳句：They say it can do nothing but burden the students.
临摹：最终，不诚实只会带来麻烦。
___________________________________________________________
2.佳句：Examination can help teachers check how much students have learned about
a subject and thus know what should be their teaching focus.
临摹：一些学生可能会把假期的大部分时间都用来娱乐，而因此荒废了学业。
___________________________________________________________
3.佳句：
佳句：They can not only know how they have studied but also find out what they haven’t mastered well.
临摹：人们不仅需要生活必需品，还想生活得舒适。
___________________________________________________________
【KEY】
1. In the end, dishonesty brings nothing but troubles.
2. Some students might spend most of their holiday time on amusement, and thus leave their study neglected.
3. People not only need the basic necessities of life, but also want to live comfortably.
择业高工资与职业发展空间矛盾
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic High Salaries or Career Development? You should write at least 150 words, and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:
1)有的大学毕业生选择工作时主要看重高工资，而有的则认为良好的职业发展空间才是更重要的
2)阐述他们各自的考虑
3)表明你的看法
High Salaries or Career Development?
___________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________ 行文思路本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点指出两种不同的选择，提纲第2点要求分别阐述这两种选择各自的理由，提纲第3点要求表明“我”的看法，由此可判断本文应为对比选择型作文。
根据所给提纲，本文应包含如下内容：指出大学毕业生选择工作时不同的侧重点：注重高工资和注重职业发展空间;对比阐述他们各自的理由;表明“我”的倾向并说明理由。
高分范文
High Salaries or Career Development?
There are more and more people looking for jobs every year, but they have different views about what kind of job they should choose. [1]Some of them focus their attention on the jobs that promise high salaries. [1]Others show a preference for those jobs that offer chances to learn skills and advancement possibilities.
[2]People holding the first view usually think that more money will result in more happiness. [3]With a lot of money in hand, they will be able to enjoy a rich life. Otherwise, they will suffer from depression [4]due to lack of enough money.
[2]However, the holders of the second view argue that one should develop his skills as roundly as possible. [5]It is career development that counts most. Without development, you will be outrun by others and fall behind the times sooner or later.
In my view, career development is the right choice because career may give us long term satisfaction [6]while high salary would give us short term happiness. Besides, [7]generally speaking, a good career development will bring high salaries sooner or later. So I will [8]give my vote to the career development first and then high salaries.
【亮点点评】
[1]用于引出两种不同的观点或倾向。
[2]用于对比分析两种观点各自的理由。
[3]“with+宾语+宾补”的独立结构充当状语。
[4]“因为缺钱”。
[5]强调句型，此处是强调句子的主语。
[6]while引导比较状语从句，意为“然而”。
[7]“一般来说”。
[8]“选择”。
佳句临摹
1.佳句：Others show a preference for those jobs that offer chances to learn skills and advancement possibilities.
临摹：近些年来，越来越多的人开始喜欢洋快餐。
___________________________________________________________
2.佳句：However, the holders of the second view argue that one should develop his skills as roundly as possible.
临摹：然而，持第二种观点的人认为体育明星们为社会做出了杰出的贡献，因此应该得到特殊待遇。
___________________________________________________________
3.佳句：Career may give us long term satisfaction while high salary would give us short term happiness.
临摹：我们之间的共同之处使我们的关系牢固，而不同之处则都会我们如何相互理解。
___________________________________________________________
【KEY】
1. In recent years, there are more and more people who have showed a preference for western fast food.
2. However, the holders of the second view argue that since sports stars have made great contributions to the society, they deserve some special treatment.
3. The similarity between us makes our relationship solid while the difference teaches us how to understand each other.
大学生就业难问题
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Employment Pressure Facing College Students. You should write at least 150 words, and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:
1)目前大学生面临就业难的问题
2)分析导致该问题的原因
3)大学生应该如何应对该问题
Employment Pressure Facing College Students ___________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________
行文思路
本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点提出一个问题，提纲第2点要求分析该问题产生的原因，提纲第3的要求说明应该如何解决该问题，由此可判断本文应为问题解决型作文。
根据所给提纲，本文应包含如下内容：指出大学生就业难的问题;分析导致该问题的原因;从大学生的角度说明应该如何应对该问题。
高分范文
Employment Pressure Facing College Students
[1]About a decade ago, university students could find satisfactory and enviable jobs after their graduation. [1]But now, things are different. Today’s university students usually experience great difficulties finding satisfactory jobs. They