高考英语专项训练之短文改错
Passage 1
(浙江) 下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线()划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
It was very nice to get your invitation to spend
I
8:00 p.m.
Dear Diary,
Here I am in the middle of a city,350 miles far away from our farmhouse.Do you want to know why we move last week? Dad lost his job,and as Mom explained,“He was lucky to find other one.”His new job meant I had to say goodbye to my classmate,my school or just everything else I love in the world.To make matters bad,now I have to share a room with my younger sister,Maggie.Tomorrow is first day of school.I am awfully tiring,but I know I’ll never fall sleep.
Good night and remember,you,dear diary,is my only souvenir from my past life and my only friend.
Yours,
Rosemary
Passage 2
(浙江)
下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线()划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
It was very nice to get your invitation to spend
I
8:00 p.m.
Two years before,I traveled to Brazil and I rented for a car.Unfortunate,I had an accident and hit another car,and I needed to stay in a hospital for at least two week.I called my parents,so I did not tell them what had happened.I knew that they will be worried about myself because I was so farther away,and that my mother would not sleep if she knew.Therefore,I told them interested stories and how I was enjoying Brazil.As a result,nobody knew truth.I still think that it was the right thing to do.
Passage 3
(浙江) 下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线()划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
It was very nice to get your invitation to spend
I
8:00 p.m.
I was playing at my cousin house.Since his family was rich than mine,he had more toys than I did.There was one on particular I’d always wanted.I put into my pocket when he wasn’t looking.I guessed,even at that age,I would never be able to enjoy to playing with the toy or faced my cousin again; I would always know I’d done something https://www.doczj.com/doc/082254473.html,te on,my aunt drove me home.When she dropped me off,I pulled out the toy slow and gave it back.She knows what had happened,but she thanked me and ever mentioned it again.
Passage 4
(浙江) 下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线()划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
It was very nice to get your invitation to spend
I
8:00 p.m.
After shopping,Mother and I went to a restaurant for lunch.I notice Mother looking at a nearby table occupy by an elderly woman and young couple.They ate silently,and it was clearly that things were not going well.As we left,Mother stopped on their table.“Excuse me,”she said,put her arm around the unhappy old woman.“You remind me so many of my mother.May I hug (拥抱) you?”The woman smiled happily as she accepted to it.After we left,I said,“That was very nice of you,Mother.So I didn’t think she looked like Grandma.”“Neither did me,”said Mother cheerfully.
Passage 5
(浙江) 下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线()划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
It was very nice to get your invitation to spend
I
8:00 p.m.
One rainy day while I was walking home with one of my friend,a truck came to a stop besides us.The driver put the window down and offered us a umbrella because he found we were wet through.I stood there and couldn’t believe in that a complete stranger is so thoughtful.The man insisted,so I grateful accepted the offer,thanked him and watched the truck disappear down the road.This man might need the umbrella himself,and he preferred to give it to everyone else.It was a lesson to us that it was possible give without expect anything in return.
模拟实战
A组(参考时间:40分钟)
Passage 1
(浙江五校联盟高三下学期第二次联考)
A young man called Low-Carbon Brother become a hit on the Internet in .He suggests living a low-carbon life,which means using less energy in our daily life so that we can help reducing carbon dioxide in the air.For example,she always picks up some waste paper on the street or uses the blank side to write something.While he is watching TV,he always turns up the screen brightness to the minimum and turns off the light.Therefore,he goes to work by bike instead of driving.Some people think what he is doing is just a show.No one can live such a simply life with so many modern invention around us.As far as I am concerned,I am strongly in support his idea and his behavior.Although what he is doing has no huge effect on global warming,but he at least can enjoy a healthy life.
Passage 2
(浙江金华十校高三二模) Dear Mom,
As Mother’s Day is approaching,I’d like to share with you a great many word.
First of all,I want to tell you I am very grateful to you for which you have done for me.Thank you very much for bring me up to be happy and brave in a often difficult society.You not only give me precious life,and teach me how to tell right from wrong.It is you and Dad who encourage me to follow my dream as I will grow.And all the time you have been helped me to step forward towards my goal.
As you know,the College Entrance Examination is just around the corner.I think I am good prepared for it,so I will face it bravely.Please don’t worry about me.I’m sure I can make it and will be admitted by my dream university.
Dear Mom,may you happy every day!
Yours sincerely,
Li Yue
Passage 3
(杭州第二次高考科目教学质量检测) Patience is of great importance in our daily life.Once I waited a bus to come at a stop.30 minutes past,but no bus came.Both upset and annoyed,I decided to walk on feet.But no sooner had I left when the bus arrived.I thought if I had waited for one more minute,I would have caught it.If I chose to take a next bus,I would have to wait for other 30 minutes.Only then do I realize my problem.Being impatient will possible waste all the effort that we have put it in.Now whenever I am close to lose my patience,I’ll think of this experience.
Passage 4
(杭州高三第二次教学质量检测) I’m glad to tell you that I have made great progress in my English study since I became the senior high school student.
When I started senior English,I found much more difficult than that we learned in junior school and I almost lost my https://www.doczj.com/doc/082254473.html,ter,I realized the important of English,so I got up early every morning,recite English words,listened to English tapes and did a lot of exercise.I also asked my teachers and classmates for better ways to learning English.
Now,I’m improving my English greatly.But I’m getting more and more interested with learning it.
Thank you so much for your great help in your class.
B组(参考时间:40分钟)
Passage 1
(杭州第二次教学质量检测) The way of communication in people’s life has changed a lot of in recent years.In the past,people keep in touch with each other mainly by writing letters or use the public telephone.But now almost everyone have a mobile phone.People can communicate with each other almost at any place and at any time.What’s more,people have easy access the Internet,it enables them to send and accept e-mails whenever they like.With these changes,people’s pace of life has been quickened and people’s work has been made more efficiently.It used to take them several days to hear from each
other,and now it takes only several minutes,even if we are in two different continents.
Passage 2
(宁波八校测试) Nowadays,people in many big cities are complaining the heavy traffic.It has serious influenced people daily life and economic development.To solve the problem,some pieces of advice is put forward.Some people suggest that more streets and roads are built.By this way,the traffic density can be reduced,thus speeding up the flow of buses and cars.
Some people advise limiting the number of bikes and cars.This can decrease the traffic flow.But on the other hand,this will effect the consumption and makes buses more crowded.
In my opinion,the number of private cars should be put under the control.And at the same time,buses should have their own special routes cannot be used by other vehicles.
Passage 3
(浙江桐乡二月模拟) The first time I decide to leave home was when I was upon graduation in high school.I was having trouble get along with my parents.I had about fifty dollar in my pockets,and so I thought about leaving home.It took me only two weeks away from home while I started to feel homesick.Living on my own is a total different experience for three main reasons: being more responsible,more decisive and more
creative.Because of I’m on my own,I get to deal with my duties without be told.I have to be more careful because my parents are not here to give me their advices.In the other hand,I could make my own future plan.I have made rules for my to follow.
Passage 4
(辽宁重点中学协作体期末) On Saturday afternoon,Li Hua and Wang Ping,members from “Green Eyes”,was having an environmental protection activity near the riverside when they catch sight of a bird on the ground.They picked it out and found it wounded.Thinking it should die
without timely help,they took it home.Under their treatment and care,the lucky bird got recovered soon.When time came for them to flying the bird,they felt a bit of pity but very delightful.I think it’s worthwhile for him to do such a thing.Here I call on the public to show respects for the nature.Only by changing the way which we treat the environment can we get along well with it.
C组(参考时间:40分钟)
Passage 1
(西安高三第一次质检)
I went hiking to a mountain with my friends last summer.It was a good trip at the beginning and something unexpected happened half way.One of my friend suddenly felt a terrible pain in his stomach and he couldn’t move any far.Nobody knew what to do it.One girl tried to call her mum in her mobile phone,but there was no signal in the mountain area.Lucky we had brought a tent with us.We put it up and let him rested in it.He took some medicine.Then he drink some water,and ate some food.After while,he felt much better and we walked on.We all enjoyed us on the top of the mountain.
Passage 2
(银川一中高三模拟)
I just come back from Britain last week.I was luckily enough to be one of the student from different countries to visit the UK from Feb.16 to 28.We paid a visit to many places,like London,Oxford or the Lake District.I learned much about British culture and history in London,where was my favorite.I also liked Oxford,in which I saw much more old buildings.The Lake District was beautiful,but it was pity that it rained heavily when they were there.The most excited thing for me in the Britain was that I made a lot of friends there.
Passage 3
(陕西澄城高三期末 ) Nowadays more and more people are concerning about their health,but how to keep health? First,it is necessary to take any exercise every day.Research shows that get plenty of exercise makes the heart beat fast and the lungs work harder.Second,eat
more fruits,vegetable and less meat.Third,getting rid of bad habits as smoking and drinking is also important way to keep healthy.Smoking and alcohol drinking injures one’s health a great deal,and therefore should be given up.If people follow these three ways of keeping fit,they’ll great improve their health.
Passage 4
(辽宁锦州中学高三月考) Time and tide wait no man.My mother is becoming a middle-age woman quietly.She had been busy running after us all the years.My father is very busy every day outside.But the heavy burden falls on my mother’s shoulder.Because my school is far from my home,I have to go to school by the train and my mother sees me off at the station every time.I often choose a seat where is close to the window,so I can see her.However,I always can’t help run tears from my eyes.All the buildings and people outside the window disappear.I wave gentle to my mother and I look at her till the view of her back disappears.Up to now,even if he is busy,she still does it as usual.The view of my mother’s back will never change in my heart.
D组(参考时间:40分钟)
Passage 1
(辽宁实验中学期末) When Jack bowed to someone,he always did it much too quickly.They needn’t to wait any longer after he finished nodding his head.So he was blamed for no manner.Then a warm-hearted man teaches him,“When you bow to somebody next time,you can count the January,February,March,until December.Then you can lift your body.Thus,the ceremony will almost perfect.” The next day,he met his uncle,but he did as the man told him to.The bow was too long that it made his uncle escape soon with a surprising look.When Jack looked down,he found his uncle gone.So he asked a passer-by,“In which month did she go away?”
Passage 2
(河南郑州47中高三第三次月考) It was dinner time.Mr.and Mrs.Smith were about to begin their dinner then they find that their son,Mike,wasn’t there yet.So Mrs.Smith asked her husband to go and
find him.Mr.Smith went to Mike’s room and found Mike laying on his face on the floor,read a book.He was laughing!Mr.Smith told him to go for dinner,and he left quite unwilling.Wondering that what absorbed his son so much,Mr.Smith took a look at the book.Now Mrs.Smith and Mike were at the table,waiting Mr.Smith.She got quite patient and sent her son for his father.Mike went back to his room.To his great surprised,he saw his father lying on the floor,reading the same storybook of hers on the floor!
Passage 3
(宁夏银川一中模拟) I’m eighteen years old and I live in small village in the Peak District,not far from Nottingham.I grow up in this village,so I know everyone here.That’s the problem—the problem is there’s nothing to do,and nobody of my age to do it with!At the moments I travel into Nottingham every day to the shop as I work.There’s a bus at 7:30 in the morning or the last bus back in the evening is at 5:30.From September,therefore,I’m going to stay in Nottingham by my aunt and uncle when my cousin joins in the Navy.I can use his room.I’m really looking forward to living in Nottingham.
Passage 4
(黑龙江哈九中高三月考) Growing up is not easy.Sometimes all that is need is someone to rely on.For many years,she was Mum.My mother was a career woman and has her own problems to take care,but when I needed her,she was always there.Her strength came from anywhere I don’t quite know,somewhere very deep.She was so strong that she would never break down,even while I went to her with all my little-boy problems and shout at her.Her strength made me strong and gave to me courage to try things other thought were impossible.A helping hand is always stronger enough to lift you up.
短文改错答案
Passage 1
Dear Diary,
Here I am in the middle of a city,350 miles far away from our farmhouse.Do you want to know why we last week? Dad lost his job,and as Mom explained,“He was lucky to find one.”His new job meant I had to say goodbye to my ,my school just everything else I love in the world.To make matters ,now I have to share a room with my younger sister,Maggie.Tomorrow is first day of school.I am awfully ,but I know I’ll never fall .
Good night and remember,you,dear diary, my only souvenir from my past life
and my only friend.
Yours,
Rosemary 剖析:1.far away是不具体的,与前面的350 miles相矛盾,故应去掉。
2.宾语从句的时间状语是last week,故应改为过去时。
3.又找到一份工作,又一个应该是another one。
4.根据上下文可知是“同学们”应用复数形式。
5.此处是并列关系应改为and。
6.上文讲到的不是什么好事,这里应该是“更糟糕的是”应用比较级。
7.first day是特指的需要限定,故应加the或my。
8.tiring是使人感到疲劳的,主语应该是物或事,故应改为tired。
9.fall asleep是固定搭配。
10.主语是you,被插入语dear diary隔开了应改为are。
Passage 2
Two years ,I traveled to Brazil and I rented for a car.,I had an accident and hit another car,and I needed to stay in a hospital for at least two
.I called my parents, I did not tell them what had happened.I knew that they
be worried about because I was so away,and that my mother would not sleep if she knew.Therefore,I told them stories and how I was enjoying Brazil.As a result,nobody knew truth.I still think that it was the right thing
to do.
剖析:1.由下文时态得知。
2.因为rent是及物动词。
3.此处是副词作状语。
4.前有two,故用可数名词复数形式。
5.此处上下文之间表示语意上的转折,所以用but。
6.由上下文时态得知。
7.此处是介宾短语,需宾格代词。
8.此处无表示比较之意。
9.interesting“有趣的”,修饰物,interested“感兴趣的”,修饰人,因为此处修饰stories,所以用interesting。
10.因为指代上面的真实情况。
Passage 3
I was playing at my house.Since his family was than mine,he had more toys than I did.There was one particular I’d always wanted.I put into my pocket when he wasn’t looking.I guessed,even at that age,I would never be able to
enjoy to playing with the toy or my cousin again;I would always know I’d done something wrong. on,my aunt drove me home.When she dropped me off,I pulled out the toy and gave it back.She what had happened,but she thanked me and mentioned it again.
剖析:1.考查名词所有格的用法。“我正在堂兄的家玩”,cousin后加’s表示“堂兄的”。
2.有比较级的标志词than却没有形容词比较级,一定是错了,rich的比较级为规则变化richer。
3.考查习语搭配in particular,意思为“尤其,特别”。
4.考查动词短语用法和代词,这里漏填了指代那个玩具的单词it/that。
5.enjoy后面跟v.-ing,所以去掉多余的to。
6.句中有连词or,表示后面省略的部分跟前面一致,为I would never be able to...or
I would never be able to...,接在be able to后要用动词原形face。
https://www.doczj.com/doc/082254473.html,ter on是固定习语,意为“后来”,而late当副词用时的词义是“迟于;晚”。
8.这里的“慢”应该是修饰作者掏出那个玩具的动作,即修饰pulled out要用副词slowly。
9.通篇是叙述过去发生的一件事,所以时态基本都为过去时,这里不可能出现knows这样明显表示习惯的一般现在时。
10.这是典型的语法没错但句意严重有误,ever表示肯定含义,而这句作者想表达的是
自己的姑母知道这件事(偷玩具)但再也没有提过,应该是否定含义,故将ever换成否定副词never才对。
Passage 4
After shopping,Mother and I went to a restaurant for lunch.I Mother looking at a nearby table by an elderly woman and young couple.They ate
silently,and it was that things were not going well.As we left,Mother stopped their table.“Excuse me,”she said, her arm around the unhappy old woman.
“You remind me so of my mother.May I hug (拥抱) you?”The woman smiled happily as she accepted to it.After we left,I said,“That was very nice of you,Mother.
I didn’t think she looked like Grandma.”“Neither did ,”said Mother cheerfully.
剖析:1.根据上下文时态,应用一般过去时。
2.根据其后的by,occupy 与table是逻辑上的动宾关系,应用过去分词形式。
3.a young couple一对年轻的夫妇。
4.此处是作表语,用形容词形式。
5.在桌子旁边停下来了,应用by或at。
6.若是两个谓语动词,不能仅用逗号并列。故put应是非谓语,与逻辑主语she是主动关系,故用putting。
7.此处是修饰动词remind,要用副词much表示程度。
8.accept是及物动词。
9.根据上下文,此处为转折关系。
10.此处为倒装句的主语,应用主格。
Passage 5
One rainy day while I was walking home with one of my ,a truck came to a stop us.The driver put the window down and offered us umbrella because he found we were wet through.I stood there and couldn’t believe in that a complete stranger so thoughtful.The man insisted,so I accepted the
offer,thanked him and watched the truck disappear down the road.This man might need
the umbrella himself, he preferred to give it to else.It was a lesson to us that it was possible give without anything in return.
剖析:1.考查名词的数。one of后用可数名词复数形式。
2.besides除……之外(还),beside在……旁边。句意:……在我们身旁停下。
3.考查冠词用法。根据umbrella的第一个发音音素为元音,故用an。
4.考查动词believe的用法。believe+that引导的宾语从句。
5.考查时态呼应。主句为过去时。上下文均为过去时。
6.考查副词用法。副词修饰动词accepted。
7.考查连词用法。按照句意前后构成转折关系,用but。
8.考查不定代词用法。一把伞不可能给everyone。someone/somebody else别人。
9.考查固定句型。此处用It is/was possible to do sth.句型。
10.考查动名词用法。作介词宾语该用动名词形式。
三年模拟·实战
A组
Passage 1
A young man called Low-Carbon Brother a hit on the Internet in .He suggests living a low-carbon life,which means using less energy in our daily life so that we can help carbon dioxide in the air.For example, always picks up some waste paper on the street uses the blank side to write something.While he is watching TV,he always turns the screen brightness to the minimum and turns off the light.,he goes to work by bike instead of driving.Some people think what he is doing is just a show.No one can live such a life with so many modern
around us.As far as I am concerned,I am strongly in support his idea and
his behavior.Although what he is doing has no huge effect on global warming, but he at least can enjoy a healthy life.
剖析:1.年为过去时间,动词用过去时态。
2.help 后面接(to) do sth.。
3.人称指代错误,这里指Low-Carbon Brother,应用he。
4.前后为并列关系,并列了picks up some waste paper和uses the blank side两个动作。
5.按照句意“把屏幕亮度调暗”,用turn down表示。
6.此处前后为递进关系,表示“另外;还有”。
7.这里用形容词修饰后面的名词“life”。
8.many后的名词应该用复数形式。
9.固定词组in support of,表示“支持”。
10.although和 but不能连用。
Passage 2
Dear Mom,
As Mother’s Day is approaching,I’d like to share with you a great many .
First of all,I want to tell you I am very grateful to you for you have done for me.Thank you very much for me up to be happy and brave in often difficult society.You not only give me precious life, teach me how to tell right from wrong.It is you and Dad who encourage me to follow my dream as I will grow.And all the time you have been me to step forward towards my goal.
As you know,the College Entrance Examination is just around the corner.I think I am prepared for it,so I will face it bravely.Please don’t worry about me.I’m sure I can make it and will be admitted my dream university.
Dear Mom,may you happy every day!
Yours sincerely,
Li Yue 剖析:1.a great many后面跟名词复数形式。
2.what you have done for me意思为“你为我所做的事”,这里是名词性从句。
3.介词后面跟动名词形式。
4.后面often是以元音音素开头的,故应该用an。
5.固定词组not only...but (also)。
6.as引导时间状语从句。在时间、条件状语从句中,用一般现在时态代替将来时态。
7.这里是现在完成进行时,强调“你一直在帮助我”,为主动语态。
8.用副词well修饰形容词prepared。
9.被……大学录取为“be admitted to /into”。
10.May sb.用来祝贺时后面跟动词原形,如:May you succeed.
Passage 3
Patience is of great importance in our daily life.Once I waited a bus to come at a stop.30 minutes ,but no bus came.Both upset and annoyed,I decided to walk on .But no sooner had I left the bus arrived.I thought if I had waited for one more minute,I would have caught it.If I chose to take next bus,I would have to wait for 30 minutes.Only then I realize my problem.Being impatient will
waste all the effort that we have put it in.Now whenever I am close to
my patience,I’ll think of this experience.
剖析:1.动词词组wait for sb./sth.等某人/某物。
2.应用动词pass的过去式passed。past是介词。
3.on foot是固定词组,表示“步行”。
4.固定词组no sooner...than...搭配。
5.特指“下一班车”,用the。
6.在数词前面用another表示“再;又”。
7.此处为一般过去时,用助动词did表示。
8.修饰动词waste应用副词possibly。
9.it与前面的that重复。
10.“be close to”中to是介词,后面跟动名词形式。
Passage 4
I’m glad to tell you that I have made great progress in my English study since I became senior high school student.
When I started senior English,I found much more difficult than we learned in junior school and I almost lost my https://www.doczj.com/doc/082254473.html,ter,I realized the of English,so I got up early every morning, English words,listened to English tapes and did a lot of .I also asked my teachers and classmates for better
ways 或 English.
Now,I’m improving my English greatly. I’m getting more and more interested learning it.
Thank you so much for your great help in your class.
剖析:1.这里泛指一名高中生。
2.缺少senior English的指代词。
3.从句引导词错误。“我们所学到的东西”用what引导。
4.固定词组lose heart,表示“丧失信心”。而“lose one’s heart to sb.”指“爱上某人”。
5.“重要性”用名词importance表示。
6.时态错误,此处应该是一般过去时。
7.exercise解释为“练习”时,为可数名词,这里用名词复数表示。解释为“锻炼”时,为不可数名词。
8.搭配错误。to learn或者of learning,作后置定语。
9.前后表示并列关系,用and。
10.固定词组be interested in...对……感兴趣。
B组
Passage 1
The way of communication in people’s life has changed a lot of in recent years.In the past,people in touch with each other mainly by writing letters or the public telephone.But now almost everyone a mobile phone.People can communicate with each other almost at any place and at any time.What’s more,people have easy access the Internet, enables them to send and e-mails whenever they like.With these changes,people’s pace of life has been quickened and people’s work has been made more .It used to take them several days to hear from each
other, now it takes only several minutes,even if are in two different
continents.
剖析:1.a lot在这里相当于副词much,作状语,修饰changed,而 a lot of后需接名词或代词。
2.过去的时间状语in the past便是提示,此处动词用过去式。
https://www.doczj.com/doc/082254473.html,ing与前面的writing 是并列关系。
4.everyone作主语,谓语动词用单数,句中的now说明用一般现在时,故将have改为has。
5.have access to 为固定短语,表示“可以获得/接近……”。
6.which引导非限制性定语从句,代指前面的the Internet。
7.receive表示“收到”,而accept表示“接受”,此处表示收到邮件。
8.形容词 efficient作补语修饰people’s work。
9.从前句语境“人们需要几天的时间才能收到彼此的信件”,后句表达的是只用几分钟,这前后为转折关系,故将and改为but。
10.文中反复提到people,they,them,所以此处的代词应为they,代指people。
Passage 2
Nowadays,people in many big cities are complaining the heavy traffic.It has
influenced daily life and economic development.To solve the problem,some pieces of advice put forward.Some people suggest that more streets and roads built. this way,the traffic density can be reduced,thus speeding
up the flow of buses and cars.
Some people advise limiting the number of bikes and cars.This can decrease the traffic flow.But on the other hand,this will the consumption and buses more crowded.
1. Three friends and I was driving on a highway. While we were going at least 50 miles per hour, we passed over a car. It had broken down, stopped on the side of the road. My friend slows down, and pulled behind the other car. He got out of the car immediate and before I knew it he was helping the other person push the car down the road to a spot where wasn’t so close to the passing cars. From the way they were pushing the car, it looked as if my friend was pushing them all by himself. I thought my friend help a complete stranger like this was a great thing, but I won’t forget his good nature or character. 2. Dear Brad, I’m very glad to hear from you. In your last letter you ask about the post-80s in China. Actually I am the boy who belongs to this group. Comparing with our parents, life for us is getting much hard. The job market is tough and the house is expensively to afford. Now many girls prefer to marry with a man who owns a house an d a car. Therefore, I don’t think love built on house and cars is true love, and I doubt how long it will last. As a matter of fact, though situations are tough today, a lot of we post-80s are making great efforts live a good life. I believe we will have a nice future. Li Hua 3. Good morning, ladies and gentlemen, Some of us are having problems about our parents, as they often look into our school bags or read our diaries. I fully understand why we are comfortable about it, but it is no need to feel too sadly. Our parents are checking in our bags or diaries to make sure we’re not getting into troubles. They have probably heard of some horrible stories about other kids and thinking we might do the same. Or perhaps they just want to connect with us and are doing it all wrong. My suggestion is: Tell them we want them to trust us as many as we’d like to trust them. If you don’t think you can talk to them, write them a letter and leave it lie around --- they are bound to read it. Thank you! 4. We spend two weeks in London last year. We went there in the autumn .We think it is the best season to visit England. The weather is usually good but there aren’t too many tourists in October. We stayed in a small h otel in the West End .It was convenient as we did most of our traveling by foot. We went to look at the places where all tourists see. We saw Buckingham Palace and the National Gallery. We went to shopping in Oxford Street and spent too many money .What we liked most, though, was going to theatre. We don’t have the chance to see so wonderful plays at home .A lot of people say English food is very badly. We didn’t think so. It’s true that most of the restaurants are French or Italian or Chinese, but we had some very good meal.
高三英语短文改错专项训练(每日一篇） (1) Last Sunday I saw the worst storm in years. It came sudden and went on for over three hours. After lunch, I went into my room to have a rest. The air was hotter, and all is quiet. Then a strong wind started to blow into my room. Pieces of paper on my desk flew high into the air and some flew out the open window. As I ran out to catch them, big drop of rain began to fall. When I came back into house, it was raining harder and harder. I tried very hard to close the window. Then I heard a loudly crashing(碰撞的)sound from the back of the house. When I ran out to find that a big tree had fallen down and broke the top of the back room. (2) I have been planning to join in our college basketball team next year, so now I am spending as more time as I can with other people who likes to play. They are teaching me the most important rules and technologies of the game, and I am getting the better all the time. We have a neighborhood team that play against other teams in the area. One of my neighbors is helping rest of us improved our skills. Tonight we are playing against one of the best teams in the city, and I think we can beat them if we won't make any mistakes. (3) Fang Tong is 34 years old, an actor, director and teacher of Beijing Opera Theater. Most of his students are from other part of China and have come to Beijing at a very young age of sixteen or seventeen. He hopes create an environment for his students that it is much more relaxing than the one he used to study in. He thought that an actor should relax himself when performing. Yet his students deep respect him and he never needs to raise his voice in order to be hearing. For his opinion, actors should go on even when they feel they have made a mistake in their performances because the moment is already gone but people can never be back to it. . . So art is always changing and
（全文由Peter编制） 2016年高考试题分项解析之专题----短文改错 1.【2016·全国新课标I】短文改错（10 分） My uncle is the owner of a restaurant close to that 1 live .Though not very big ,but the restaurant is popular in our area .It is always crowded with customers at meal times .Some people even had to wait outside My uncle tells me that the key to his success is honest. Every day he makes sure that fresh vegetables or high quality oil are using for cooking. My uncle says that he never dreams becoming rich in the short period of time. Instead, he hopes that our business will grow steady. 2.【2016·全国新课标II】短文改错（共10小题，每小题1分，满分10分） The summer holiday is coming. My classmates and I are talking about how to do during the holiday. We can chose between staying at home and take a trip. If we stay at home, it is comfortable but there is no need to spend money. But in that case, we will learn little about world. If we go on a trip abroad, we can broaden you view and gain knowledges we cannot get from books. Some classmates suggest we can go to places of interest nearby. I thought that it is a good idea. It does not cost many, yet we can still learn a lot. 3.【2016·全国新课标III】短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分） The teenage year from 13 to 19 were the most difficult time for me . They were also the best and worse years in my life . At the first, I thought I knew everything and could make decisions by yourself. However, my parents didn’t seem to think such. They always tell me what to do and how to do it. At one time , I even felt my parents couldn’t understand me so I hoped I could be freely from them. I showed them I was independent by wear strange clothes. Now I am leaving home to college. At last, I will be on my own, but I still want to have my parents to turn to whenever need help.
高考英语短文改错考点解析-形容词与副词 一、考点规律分析 短文改错对形容词与副词的考查主要涉及形容词和副词比较等级的误用（尤其是在本身已是比较级的词前误加more）、形容词与副词的混用（如修饰动词时误用形容词或修饰名 词时误用副词）等，另外，用作表语时该用形容词的却误用了名词、简短副词（如in，down 等）的误加与漏用、涉及形容词搭配的as…as 结构、how 与what 的混用等也是常考的考点。 二、真题单句归纳 （1）After an hour or so we began to feel very frightening. （frightening 改为frightened，因它表示某人感到害怕，而不是令人害怕）（全国卷） （2）Charles said，“As soon as I see a realy tall building，I want to climb it. （realy 改为really 或real，若改为really，则修饰tall；若改为real，则修饰building）（全国卷）（3）Last Sunday，police cars hurry to the taller building in New York. （taller 改为tallest，因从含义上看此处应是最高级）（全国卷） （4）As a result，people in the modern world generally live much more longer than people in the past. （去掉more，因为longer 本身已是比较级，不能再受more 修饰）（全国卷）（5）Therefore，there are still some countries where people have shorter lives. （Therefore 改为However，因此处语意转折）（全国卷） （6）People in industrial countries can expect to live for twice so long as people who lived a few hundred years ago. （so long as 改为as long as，其意为“与……一样长”）（全国卷）（7）In some places you may borrow many books as you want. （many 之前加as，因 as …… as 结构不完整）（全国卷） （8）I told Mother，Father，Sister and all my friends here that a great time I had. （that 改为what）（全国卷） （9）I never knew a ride down a river could be so much exciting. （去掉much，因much 不能用来修饰形容词的原级，尽管它可用来修饰比较级和最高级）（全国卷）（10）I‘m sure we’ll have a wonderfully time together. （wonderfully 改为wonderful，因它是放在名词前作定语）（全国卷）
Last week my parents and I took a two-days trip to Emei Mountain in Sichuan. As every one knows, it’s famous mountain with all kinds of plants and animals. The weather was fine. It was about noon we arrived at the foot of the mountain. The three of them were very excited. As we climbed the mountain, we fed monkeys, visiting temples and told stories. On the way up I was busy taking picture since the scenery was so beautiful. The time passes quickly. Evening came down. We spent the night in a hotel at the top of the mountain. The food was expensive and the service was good. I was so tired that I fell asleep at the moment my head touched the pillow. （二） Many teachers worry about the effects of television with young people. According to studies, many children spend more time watching television than they spend in school. Because so much viewing, children may not be develop the habit of read and the ability to enjoy themselves. No one worries much about the radio program young people listen to, although radios can be very noise. Teachers also wonder about the effects of television commercials. On one year the average child will see 25,000 television commercials, all planned and written by grown-ups to make children to want things that they don't real need. （三） I’m the captain o f our school team so with my fellow players we’ve won sever al games. There will an important game next month. But one of the best player in our team told me just then that he wouldn’t play basketball once more. His parents asked him to spend in more time preparing for the college entrance examination. I feel sorry to him. But his parents think go to college is more important than playing sports and college was the only place for a smart boy like his son. So my friend had no choice. He wanted to make their parents happy. (四) When I first learned to write English, I ran into many difficulties . The main problem was in that I always thought in Chinese and tried to translate anything into English. My teacher advised me to keep my diary. I followed her advice and should put down 100 words or so each day. Soon I began to enjoy talk to myself on paper as I was learning to express me in simple English .One day I wrote a little story and showed to my teacher .She liked it very much and reads it to the class .All said the story was a good one. Their word were a great encouragement to me. （五） Dear Ralph, I’m a newcomer here of a small town. I would describe myself as shy and quietly. Before my classmates, it seems always difficult for me to do things as well them. I'm sure they will laugh to me and see me as a fool. So I feel happy every day. Besides, I have few friends. I don't know that they don't like to talk with me. Sometimes, we talked to each other very well in class, but after class we become stranger at once. I am trying to improve the situation since it doesn’t seem to work. Can you tell me about what I should do? Yours, Xiao Wei
短文改错专题 一．改错题型特点： 高考短文改错是知识和能力的综合测试题型。主要考查考生在语篇中综合运用英语知识的准确性及词、句、篇和语法的综合水平。高考短文改错设置的考点灵活多变，知识层次多，覆盖面广，包括词法、句法、行文逻辑以及语篇结构等，是一种在较高层次上考查考生对英语知识的掌握和语言综合运用能力的测试题型。 二．短文改错常见考点设置： 考点1：名词 命题特点: 本来用复数,却用单数；本来用单数，却用复数。 记住常考的几个不可数名词：news, work(工作), advice, fun, progress, information, luck, weather, music, health, change(零钱),baggage(行李), luggage(行李),furniture, jewellery, equipment等 改正方法: (1)根据名词前的修饰限定成份(2)根据上下文的逻辑关系. 1. She said that she and my schoolmate all wished me success. 2. After class we become stranger at once. 3. They want me to devote all my time to my studies so that I’ll get marks in all my subject. 4. On the way up I was busy taking picture since the scenery was so beautiful. 5. There are advantage for students to work while studying at school. 6. Now we can get millions of informations from the Internet. 7. He had no ideas that the kitchen was not for guests. 8. She is one of the most intelligent girl in our class. 9. I looked at his other hands. 10. Most of them are peasant and some often go fishing in the sea. 11. We have made great progresses with Mr. Liu teaching us. 12. Head teacher Guy Holloway said the new rules should help students get higher grade. 13. He was tall, with broad shoulder and a beard that turned from black toward gray over the years. 14. He’s getting married next month and decides to buy some furnitures. 考点2：代词 命题特点：1.男女性代词用反；2.单数指代复数；3.代词词性用错；4.缺少人称代词。 改正方法: 根据上下文的逻辑关系以及人称代词的数和格的一致问题。 15. Rose is such a kind girl that we all like him very much. 16. The Smiths did his best to make me feel at home. 17. I have a good friend who’s name is Liu Mei. 18. It was about noon when we arrived at the foot of the mountain. The three of them were very excited. 19. Soon I began to enjoy talking to myself as I was learning to express me in simple English. 20. My story book is much more interesting than her. 21. One day I wrote a little story and showed to my teacher. 22. Some students may also save up for our college or future use. 23. Do you think necessary for you to learn Japanese well? 24. I dressed me quickly and hurried out the house. 25. You’d better keep that he said in mind. 26. He has three children, two of them are teachers. 27. The population of China is much larger than it of the USA.
Nearly five years before,and with the help by our father,my sister and I planted some cherry tomatoes(圣女果)in our back garden.Since then—for all these year—we had been allowing tomatoes to self-seed where they please.As result,the plants are growing somewhere.The fruits are small in size,but juicy and taste.There are so much that we often share them with our neighbors.Although we allow tomato plants to grow in the same place year after year,but we have never had any disease or insect attack problems.We are growing wonderfully tomatoes at no cost! （2014课标2） My dream school starts at 8:30 a.m.and ends at 3:30 p.m.They are three lessons in the morning and two in the afternoon.We didn’t need to do so many homework.Therefore,we have more time with afte r-school activities.For example,we can do reading for one and a half hour and play sports for one hour every day. My dream school look like a big garden.There are all kinds of the flowers and trees around the classroom buildings.We can lie on the grass for a rest,or sat by the lake listening music.The teachers here are kind and helpfully.They are not only our teachers but also our friends.
高考英语短文改错分类解析 解题步骤： 1. 着手篇章，了解大意 考生做短文改错时，不应急于改错，而应先把文章浏览一遍，弄清文章的脉络层次和中心思想，把握作者所采用的时态、语态、人称和数。可以先把短文中明显的错误(如固定词组、词性、单复数)或认为有可能的错误(如句子结构的错误)用铅笔轻轻地标出来，为下一步正式改错做准备。 2. 逐句分析，依句改错 在短文改错中，题随行出、错随句生。因此，考生应在略读全文、把握文章中心思想的基础上，对文章进行逐行逐句研究，从词汇的用法、句子的结构到文章的篇章逻辑都要进行仔细地推敲，把错误之处一一改正过来，切不可孤立地依行改错。若一时发现不了错误，不要揪住一处不放而耽搁太多时间。可以在全文改完以后，再回过头来进行难点突破。若已改出了八、九处错误，剩余一两处实在找不出错误而时间又来不及时，则大胆地打上钩，不留空白。当然，有些考生在考试过程中由于紧张而脾气急躁，一看找不到错处就打勾，这也是不明智的。因为近几年来，该题的出题方式基本稳定，只有一处是正确的。 3. 复读全文，检查核对 考生在做完短文改错题后，务必要把已改好的短文复读一遍，查看是否出现疏漏或遗漏的地方，特别要注意时态、语态、代词所指及人称和数等篇章逻辑方面的问题，检查无误后方可定稿作答。 错误分类解析： 高考英语短文改错分类解析---名词 一、考点规律分析 短文改错的名词考点主要涉及名词的单复数问题，即在该用复数的地方误用其单数，或在该用单数的地方误用其复数。 二、真题单句归纳 (1) We stopped to rest for a while and to drink some waters from a stream. (2) We climb everywhere, not only in America. We have been to Europe many time. (3) There are branch library in many villages. (4) I hope that you two could come and visit us some times soon. (5) They were eager to know everything about China and asked me lots of question. (6) We study quite a few subject, such as maths, Chinese, English and physics. (7) Happy birthday, Peter, and many happy return of the day! (8) She was doing her homeworks one Sunday morning. (9) She said that she and my schoolmate all wished me success. (10) I used to love science class — all of them— biology, chemistry, geography, physics. (11) They did not want me to do any work at family. (12) I’ll get good marks in all my subject. (13) On the way up I was busy taking picture since the scenery was so beautiful. (14) Without enough knowledges, you can never teach well. (15) Their word were a great encouragement to me. (16) You know, that was a dinner we had waited for several month. (17) Nowadays millions of people of all age take pleasure in a hobby. (18) You can find all kinds of information in just a few minute on the Internet. 三、模拟单句演练 (1) Women live longer than men in most country. (2) The film is very interesting. I have seen it many time. (3) It’s said that all the ticket have been sold out. (4) The children spend a lot of times watching TV. (5) I met a lot of interesting peoples on holiday. (6) The flower in the park were all pleasing. (7) He’s getting married next month and decides to buy some furnitures. (8) Computer are becoming more and more popular in the country. (9) It’s one of the most interesting book that I’ve ever read. (10) Hearing the news, the woman burst into tear. (11) He hasn’t lived here long, but he has a great many friend here.
2018高考英语专题---短文改错 压轴题高分策略之错词 一、考点规律分析 短文改错中，错词所占比重最高，常占整篇短文改错10题中的的6个小题左右。错词的情况也最为复杂，常见的有：动词错误；名词错误；连词错误；冠词错误；形容词和副词错误；代词错误；非谓语动词常见错误；介词错误；习惯用法错误以及逻辑上的错误等。矚慫润厲钐瘗睞枥庑赖。 1. 动词的常见错误 ①一般现在时与一般过去时错用； ② and前后动词时态不一致； ③主谓不一致； ④缺少动词，特别是be动词； ⑤第三人称单数形式错用； ⑥主动语态和被动语态错用。 They did not want me to do any work at home; they want me to devote all my time to my studies.聞創沟燴鐺險爱氇谴净。 【答案】did改为do As we climbed the mountain, we fed monkeys, visiting temples and told stories. 残骛楼諍锩瀨濟溆塹籟。 【答案】visiting改为visited 【思路分析】 通读全句可知，句子的整个时态为一般过去时，有三个并列的谓语动词，分别为fed，visiting和told。很明显，并列连词and前后的动词时态应该保持一致，所以应该把visiting改为visited。酽锕极額閉镇桧猪訣锥。 One evening she told me that something happened when her parents was out.彈贸摄尔霁毙攬砖卤庑。
2020年高考英语短文改错典型试题专项突破终极版（共10篇）含答案解析 1 A few days before, I saw an interesting program on TV. It was about the problem of the traffic in our cities. It seemed that a great deal of damage had done by traffic. But now our cities are still suffered from riffs problem. Some buildings are actually falling to piece. It is often faster to walk than to go by car or bus, The problem has been getting worse for long time. This is only one problem among thousands others in our cities. All sorts of terrible things have happened with our cities. And the biggest question is “What can we do about it?”Our roads have ever been designed for such a heavy traffic. Key：1．将before改为ago。before用于过去完成时，ago用过去时。2．去掉traf-fic 前的冠词the。traffic指车辆。为不可数名词。3．had后加been。为被动语态。4．suffered 改为suffedng。为进行时。5．pmce改为pmces。fall to pieces倒塌。6．正确。7．在long 之前加。a。for a long time为固定用法。8．在to。thousands后加of。thousands of为惯用法，表示“数千的”。9．将with改为To。happen to为固定用法。10．根据句意将ever改为nevcr。 2 Most Americans don’t like to get advices from melnbers of tbelr famlly. When they are in a trouble and need advice, they write letters for newspapers or magazincs. Most newspapers print letters from readers with problems. Along with the Ietters there have answers written by people who are was first grown in which is now part of the United States. Columbus, Who discovered America, saw the Indians smoking. Soon the drying leaves were transported to Europe where smoking began to catch on. At the late 1800s, the Turks made cigarettes popular. Smoking cigarettes is danger. The US Public Health Service stated that the smoking cigarettes is the reason of lung cancer and several other deadly diseases. The US government now requires that each package of cigarettes bears a special warning against the danger of smoking. Key: 1. 在for后加a。for a long time很久。2. 将that改为which。为非限制性定语从句。 3. which改为that。为名词性从句，“就是在现在美洲的地方”。 4. 正确。 5. drying改为dried。意为“晒干的”。 6. At改为In。在……年代用in。 7. dan-ger改为dangerous。 8. 去掉smoking 前的the。动名词做主语。 9. reason改为cause。reason理由，cause导致……的原因，起因。 10. bears改为bear。require后的宾语从句应用should+动词的虚拟结构，should可省略。 3